Gosh, you have a fast getaway car with the loot in the trunk, and Carboot Sales don't have anything illegal?

stygg, you got main point, and then secondary point staged beautifully, but it's not a selling composition yet. Reconsider how small the rest of the text is? Balance? Larger, condensed font?

Also, this would be a color print? You have white, teal, and black. Couldn't you print black on teal and eliminate the white?

Just my 2 pence. Outstanding work very quickly, stygg!

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