Another pic for your opinion

**sansuebar** · 14 February 2007, 05:44 PM

Hey everyone,
here is another little stylized drawing that I've been working on. I would love to have your suggestions and opinions.

Thanks,
Sandra

**parahandy** · 14 February 2007, 06:14 PM

Looks like you sailing against the wind.

**Intbel** · 14 February 2007, 06:17 PM

Originally Posted by sansuebar

Hey everyone,
here is another little stylized drawing that I've been working on. I would love to have your suggestions and opinions.
Thanks,
Sandra

As you asked ...

Yup, I like it. Three things stand out for me: a person in the boat would make a difference; the flag is superfluous and spoils the whole thing and the lighthouse - not sure about the stripes which make me wonder if, perhaps 'tis a helter-skelter with a light on top.

That is a subjective opinion - as you asked.

Overall, I do like the picture.

**Intbel** · 14 February 2007, 06:18 PM

Originally Posted by parahandy

Looks like you sailing against the wind.

Is that a jibe?

**Whizz Kid** · 14 February 2007, 06:20 PM

Nice Drawing Sandra.

**sansuebar** · 14 February 2007, 06:35 PM

Man, you guys are tough! But, as I said, I asked for your opinions...

(by the way, I was recreating a scene that I have on a serving tray in my kitchen . . . hence, the flag

Sandra

**jamesmc** · 14 February 2007, 07:40 PM

Well proportioned and in the essence of simple colors with line art.

This type of art is versatile as it can be ported to other medium quite easily.

Maybe the American flag is Donald Trump's. You know the one he is being sued over (neighborhood association) in Florida for being too big. heh heh, joking.

It has a calm balance about it.

I'm sorry you can't see your grade! It will be posted on the bulletin board with the others!

All kidding aside, you drawing is excellent. I love line art especially those that invoke color in simple form.

**sansuebar** · 14 February 2007, 09:35 PM

Thank you for your nice comments. I just wish I had a tenth of the talent that you guys have.

Sandra

**masque** · 14 February 2007, 11:21 PM

I agree. Loose the stripes on the lighthouse and the flag looks like a plank of wood with a flag painted on it. If you could make it wave a little it would look better or remove it all together might be better.
Otherwise the rest of the drawing looks very good.
Derek