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    Default Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    Hello, gang, long time no see. I hope everyone's doing well. Just wanted to post a couple of new t-shirt designs and get some feedback. Thanks!

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  2. #2
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    Default Re: Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    Well there are a few of us still around. I would not wear one of these but I am not your market. They're cute and I am sure will appeal to those who have a closet full of cute t-shirts..

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    Default Re: Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    Quote Originally Posted by gwpriester View Post
    Well there are a few of us still around. I would not wear one of these but I am not your market. They're cute and I am sure will appeal to those who have a closet full of cute t-shirts..
    Thanks for your reply, GW. Two questions, if I may:

    Do you find the text hard to read?

    What kind of T-Shirts do you like?

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    Default Re: Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    I like it.
    Like GWP, I don't think I'd wear it, but there's a lot of market our there among the younger generation.

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    Default Re: Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    I like the design.

    Because you asked for comments I will give you mine, for whats it is worth, which is not much.

    I can read the text fine.

    It looks like on the mom one you are going for more of a Chinese dragon style. Other than the egg I don't get the feeling of what makes you think of hot mom. I don't have any idea on what to improve on, it's is just my impression.

    For the dad one I think you need some fire being shot out of the mouth of the dragon. On the second line I don't like "even badder" I think it should be just be "badder" remove the word "even".

    For the record your dragons look real good. Do you think they will screen print good with the lighter green design on the dragon's bodies?

    Ray

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    Default Re: Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    I agree about 'even badder' - it's clumsy - perhaps just say 'bad' but maybe stretch it out say, as in b..a..a...a..d emphasiszing by increasing the font size per letter, or using cartoon sparkles maybe, again, just a thought...

    and egg certainly does not say hot to me, it says motherhood in the sense of family, and though those are not exclusive is that really what you wanted to say ?

    text reads fine
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    Default Re: Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

    I would leave the bylines out -- the titles and designs tell it all -- and, instead of an egg, put a baby/little dragon, similar to the one in the other design, next to the mother dragon

 

 

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