Ron. Your work Disappointing? I think not. I like your wire frame but I too look forward to seeing the colored in image. Based on all your other work, I thing it will be a smashing success.
Paul
Ron. Your work Disappointing? I think not. I like your wire frame but I too look forward to seeing the colored in image. Based on all your other work, I thing it will be a smashing success.
Paul
Thanks Paul. I'm having trouble with the color scheme of the burger building itself. I want it to be representative of the period, but I don't want an exact copy of a specific business.
I know GP, who has done much for me in the past, has very kindly encouraged me to go to school, but it isn't possible for me to do for a number of reasons I won't go into.
I still have things I want to add to the drawing, but one step at a time. After that, I'll post the color drawing and look forward to critiques to help me learn more and give me ideas and a chance to grow.
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Thanks teach! I intend to start on the waitress, but keep spotting things I don't like. Plus I try to anticipate possible critiques from all you great supporters and making more adjustments. This is a great learning experience and I really appreciate the observations and critiques I'm getting!
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I know it's going to be a masterpiece, Ron. That's what's great about TG, everyone helps to make it a better illustration.
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OMTS ! (Oh my Thick Shake!)
Ron, if you posted the wireframe in a real gallery, it'd win a prize!
In awe,
Gary
Gary my buddy!
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awesome retro!!!!! anyway, can't wait for the full renders... well done so far!
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Thanks Jay.
Well, the work is complete in as all the elements I wanted in it are there. However, there is a lot of drawing aspects that, for me, are less than quality work. It's not that I haven't put the time in, it's that I just can't seem to figure out how to do it, i.e. drawing people. I hate drawing people because I can't seem to get the nuances down that make a person look like a person and not a crappy drawing of a person.
Anyway, I will revisit this later because there's always something I didn't see that needs correcting or cleaning up.
Oh, and the food graphics are mine.
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