New art piece - "Tombstone"

[Toonicorn]

Hi again, all!

I've created a new art piece to enter into a contest sponsored by an anti-tobacco group. I used markers, pencils, PSE4 and Xara to create it. I'd love some feedback on it. Here's the description for it:
Sometimes, addiction to tobacco can lead a person to create his own doom. The white lily represents the grief of this man's loved ones. The wall represents the separation between life and death. The white bird is the man's soul, departing.

[masque]

Excellent. Very well thought out and composed and I love the colour scheme.Derek

[Nimrodor]

I love the colors you used. The only thing and it's a nit-pick is the dove seems a tad crowded and I do mean a tad besides that I can't see anything at all wrong with this.

[Ron Duke]

The illustration itself is excellent.

[gwpriester]

Love it. Very nice concept.

[Tabian]

Well up my street. Love it...

[gray]

Good luck with the contest, toonicorn. You've created an interesting piece of work.