The first one with the helmet, is the one I like.

What I would say, is that if the word on the sword is meant to be 'KARRATI', then the 'I' too far from the last 'T'.
There is too much space between the last two letters and, for my liking.
If it is meant to be two words, then I don't know what 'KARRAT' is?
I suppose you would have to know the character and the comic, or the game etc?

But, it's a very good drawing.