I get the point, too busy.
The thing, is a stylized brush, the striped part was done at random but kinda looks like the continental US in a way. (unintentional)
Like most of the stuff I do I have no preconceived plan, just start and let a concept evolve. Generally I wouldn't post anything but I felt I could use some feedback, I guess I was right.
I'm not sure how it would look on the web page but I know I would never use it for business cards.
I wish I could draw like you guys who use Xara, I have played with it but with little success.