I'd say, "have MORE fun!!", stygg.

I think you're well on your way to Minimalist Story-Telling!

It's a fun, small idea, period.

Not sure, but the sky went to bitmap, didn't it? The reason why might be that you didn't name it, or you did a not-allowed transformation.

Oh, there are things call headline fonts and text fonts. That's Comic Sans you used? I'd suggest Impact or some heavier typeface, but that's always the call of the artist. There's a whole category of typefaces that are for display, and often they're called, for example "Benguiat Display", or whatever. Display fonts are heavied up a little so their thinnest stems don't make TV display buzz when the transmission tries to reconcile .7 pixels or whatever, you know?

If there's any other moves you want to perform on this file, I'd say go for it, and let's us take a look when you're done.

My Best,

Gary