Perfume oils

[salaam]

Please guide:

http://www.salaam.force9.co.uk/jamaicanfo/index.htm

Thanks,

Anas

[steve.ledger]

Interesting use of flash there Anas

I'm a bit put off with the home page menu location and site background colour being different to all other pages. Personally I'd maintain consistency there.

[salaam]

Thanks for the reply Steve.

The site will be much more consistent when completed. I was just trying out new ideas.
Some pages look a little too clinical like a PDF while the home page may be too busy?
What do you think.

[gsthunder]

For what it is worth coming from me...

The yellow rotating star thing over the bottle is very hard to see. If kept it needs to be a different color.

I would use the Home Page Header, and then the row of bottles( or whatever those are )at the bottom, on all the pages. I would add the page specific info to the middle. The other pages seem too empty without these elements to me.


Overall a nice layout. Interesting text used.

[salaam]

Thanks for your comments.
I will look at the site on another computer as I did suspect that this old monitor was too dark. That would explain the star visibility.

I will implement the other suggestions.

Thank again.

[gwpriester]

Well done Anas.

Two suggestions. The text you have in the small box that is fully justified does not work and looks inelegant. I would center justify the text to give it a more poetic effect.

The animation is excellent. But, what if you make the star shape the same color as your page color, white. Then the visitor will not be aware of the star shape and will see only the effect of the rotating star as it appears over the bottle shape. This will make it more mysterious and magical (in my opinion).

[salaam]

Thanks Gary,
Yes you are right concerning the inelegance, I will centre it.
Regarding the star, if I make it white I will have to add more detail to the bottle in the background so that the star shape will stand out. I will experiment with this.