Val,

As always, your skills and good judgement inspire! The Visitor is a joy to see -- thanks for sharing it with us.

I don't want to be nit-picky but I humbly suggest the floor shadows are not up to the same standards as the rest of the drawing. The level of realism breaks down a bit for me at the floor. I do like the floor colour and how it works with the rest of the drawing but wonder if it needs some reflective sheen etc to make it more grounded. Perhaps that's something to think about.

Regards, Ross (your student)