My feedback is this

1) Don't lecture people
2) Keep the message simple
3) Make the church approachable and friendly
4) Say what you do

The current page is none of that.

On the index page of the site be ultra simple. Let people decide if they want to know more. Don't ram it down their throat. You aren't writing a book or presenting a sermon.

People will come if they want to know more. Don't scare them off.

It's just my opinion.