Rip - Torn

[Rik]

OK, Larry.
I wasn't quite going for an exact likeness, but, as you mention (in your drawing in your post) that something indicated by your red line bother you.
But, you don't quite mention, what exactly it is, that bothers you.
However, I decided to look for some images of the Avengers logo.

If you look at the attached image, then mine is not too far from what is in the picture attached.

Maybe, you'd like to tell me what it is that bothers you?!

EDIT: By the way. Well done for setting Mr Whatisname on Gary. He'll soon find out what he's in for!