Hi, Guys! It's been awhile!

[handrawn]

I agree about 'even badder' - it's clumsy - perhaps just say 'bad' but maybe stretch it out say, as in b..a..a...a..d emphasiszing by increasing the font size per letter, or using cartoon sparkles maybe, again, just a thought...

and egg certainly does not say hot to me, it says motherhood in the sense of family, and though those are not exclusive is that really what you wanted to say ?

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[Boy]

I would leave the bylines out -- the titles and designs tell it all -- and, instead of an egg, put a baby/little dragon, similar to the one in the other design, next to the mother dragon