would love some feedback on a banner

**GCFL** · 09 June 2012, 04:28 PM

Good idea Kara..I moved the O back a bit and it does help.

**angelize** · 09 June 2012, 06:00 PM

Another thought, is it just the circular dragon crest that is the client logo? if so you could try tucking the crest behind the complete word originals. Perhaps something like this

(Note I just used arial for this just to give you an idea)

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**GCFL** · 09 June 2012, 06:43 PM

Hi Angelize. Yeah, the dragon and crest along with its position to the rest of the text is really part of the logo so I dont think I can change that. I have taken some liberties as is so not sure I can go that far. I have sent the mock-up to her so we'll see what she thinks.

**wizard509** · 10 June 2012, 02:33 AM

Originally Posted by Karateed

One other idea comes to mind. To me it seems like the 'O' is infringing on the R in the word originals....I'm curious to how moving the 'O' a bit left would work....it might not but it's just a thought......

I agree, sorry but that logo as an O doesn't seem to work.

**stygg2003** · 10 June 2012, 06:25 AM

Originally Posted by wizard509

I agree, sorry but that logo as an O doesn't seem to work.

Do you think altering the design of the O might help, move it to the left a little and perhaps adding an inner bevel to represent an O better?

Stygg

**GCFL** · 10 June 2012, 07:40 AM

it may but really the logo cant be changed more than I have since it is the clients logo. I wonder if I should tell her that O just does not work.

**Karateed** · 10 June 2012, 08:18 AM

Have you tried moving it a bit left just to see if it changes how the work is viewed? It may not make a difference but maybe it would. It would be great if you could post one like that just so we could see if it makes it more palatable. Other than the 'O', this is a great design. The design of the 'O' is also very nice, just doesn't quite work with the rest of the letters, but I can see why it would be part of the word.....just my 2cents and really, you've done a much better jub than I ever could.....