First I have to say beautiful work! I love the cherry blossoms but I prefer the first one with the fuller blossoms. I'm not keen on the O in Originals ( this might be just me) All in all a very nice piece.
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I would also say that the artwork is beautiful.
But...
The 'O' of ORIGINALS doesn't work at all.
When I look at it, it reads 'RIGINALS'
The 'O' is beautifully designed but it doesn't fit in with the word if you try and read it.
Well, that's my honest opinion.
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Nice work. Great colouring, But, I'm with Frances here. The O is offputting, with the rest of the text. I don't know if it's the floor shadow, with the reflection of the remaining text. or the positioning of the O, or the dark ring around the O. Heck, it must be the O. Then again, it might be just me too.
Jim
Thanks guys. Hmmm, not sure what to do about the "O". That is the client's logo and she wants it in the banner. I designed everything else but the logo so I'm kind of stuck with it.
Well, if you're stuck with it, perhaps reducing it in size might help it become a bit more part of the word....I agree with the fuller leaved branch as well, pretty nice design overall.....
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That's an idea Karateed. I think i will also see if she minds the removal of the shadow...I really dont like that myself Tim. This has given me food for thought. Thanks again everyone.
bummer! client did not like the cherry blossoms. All the talk about her logo and she dislikes the part I liked. She wants a lotus flower. Back to the drawing board. :/
Best to get a clear brief before you start work, and a down payment with an agreement that the cost includes two revisions only.
Too many 'clients' are under the impression that artwork, graphic and web design is a five minute job
And she likes her logo... some people have a very hmmmm how shall I put it... 'interesting' view on design.
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