New Dodge Dart poster

[Toonicorn]

Thanks, guys! I appreciate the feedback. Here is the tweaked poster, following your suggestions:



What do you think?

[masque]

Better. Though my personal opinion is that is still too tall and the older model and date a little removed from the main focus. A bit like the stuff on the top shelf of a supermarket that no one notices.
Derek

[angelize]

Hi Toonicorn, that poster is looking good, Although I have to agree with Derek if you can either bring the height down or make it a little wider would be good. If you are able to make it a little wider and leave the new model where it is, as if it is going to move into the extra space.

[Albacore]

Can't see this height thing, because the view of the car is low to give the car an aggressive stance it is always going to have this look. Nice drawing good use of colours.

[wizard509]

I have to agree with Albacore on this one, I can't see the height problem either. I think it's looking good.

[gray]

Looks good toonicorn.