For a flash into it did not take too long to load and it was Ok. Now when someone states that something is OK do not take that as a Knock down. It was a lot of work in scripting or drawing, howevever you achieve your flash movie but it was a bit quick in some of the text. If you were selling your skills as a designer? I do not think you quite managed it. Need to make more of the the sales, good examples of your design work but you did not lead me into to hiring yor designs skills