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    I think I posted this a long time ago, but I've revised it since and need toget it on the web so figured I'd put it up here for criticism! Any comments are greatly appreciate!

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    I think I posted this a long time ago, but I've revised it since and need toget it on the web so figured I'd put it up here for criticism! Any comments are greatly appreciate!

    Steve Newport

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    But don't ask me to seperate it for printing in Xara. Ya can't get there from here.

    Flat colors. That's the only workaround I have to date.

    XPG - soon, real soon!

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    Steve

    I'm not sure if the textured effect buys you anything. At any rate, I would make the insides of the microphone green to make the microphone shape read quicker.

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    <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by gwpriester:
    Steve

    I'm not sure if the textured effect buys you anything.


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    Not sure I understand what u meant by that?! But I will try the green inside the microphones

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    Steve,

    Since the name of your group is The Drifters, I would take the textured effect off of those letters. I think you will find that it will push those letters (The Drifters) more to the front plus give them more readability.

    Jerry

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    The letters design with the cracked font is just a bit too to much. I know you are aiming for kind of an oldish effect but I think it detracts a bit too much.

    Maybe take that version of font with out the cracked effect and play with adding in some effects that will trasnfer to more of a texturized flat color.

    I have one cracked font and I don't even like it very much and don't use it at all!!

    Looks like a good TShirt design over all!!

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