OK, first of all - the business cards.
I like the logo, but don't like the cards - too much small text. Older people will be reading them.
The brochures.
Not much of a fan of those, but I think that's partly a cultural thing.
"Loved one's". I am the apostrophe police. The apostrophe should not be there.
"..." on the end of headings? Yuk.
"Family Owned and Operated" - the heading has content below that has nothing to do with that fact. I know a lot of people are proud of this but in 2020 do their clients care (I understand it's important to the client)?
"Planning for the future" - smiling faces. Really?
The video.
Nice opener - that's where it should have stopped - with the logo. Presenting slabs of text for people to read kills the idea. If you want text make it longer - much, much longer and animate in sections.
Just me nitpicking as usual.
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