@mikeymopar—

I like what you've done with the arrangement of elements so they frame and point at the who, where, and when in your version of the poster!

From a distance, my eye is drawn toward the text, and secondarily, toward the headline. All the rest is embellishment, go as it is, it still rightfully needs to be visually subordinate to the other elements.

Anyone care to do a revision 2 with Mike's input?

-g