Re: Site an logo created using designer X9
first impressions : you are aiming this primarily at an up-market clientèle who is used to up-market, expensive services with matching marketing budgets - you are therefore competing in a visually high quality website market where design and impact are important, these people are used to gucci, pierre cardin, mercedes etc
the image at the bottom left of the home page shows a couple on a moto not wearing helmets which to me screams "unsafe" and illegal in france and most other eu countries - i can't even see the relevance of the image and if an image makes me wonder why it is there then it is by definition superfluous
most of your images do not have alt or title tags which doesn't help me either (the menu has alt tags only on hover)
the logo at first glance looks like a bat because of its small size and therefore I would do what I can to make it clearer, i.e. remove the 3d relief, and i'm surprised the logo is only on the home page and not in the same place on every page
every page seems to have a different layout, unless this serves a particular purpose it is a design flaw
the home page looks like a pasteboard not a finished page, nothing is aligned, my eyes wander everywhere wondering where the really important information is
your strapline "Protéger à tout prix, ce qui n’a pas de prix." is brilliant and yet it is relegated to the far right on the home page and is nowhere else to be seen
the images of the vehicles at the top of the home pages makes a powerful statement yet the header of every other page is bland and boring, the impact of that home page header is lost
the frequent questions page is a bit of a joke because even i who have never had the wealth to require such a service have plenty of questions and that is THE purpose of the site, TO INFORM ME!
include a "case studies" page to show potential clients the kind of real-world services they can expect
include a "testimonials" page to show potential clients how other clients think of you
overall i would say this is a promising start in the right direction but it has a long way to go before françois hollande calls you to protect him on his next skirt-sniffing excursion
a good starting point for any web designer is "look at the competition and do it better"
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