Also following Gary's suggestion, is this better?
Also following Gary's suggestion, is this better?
I'm afraid the angle of the first hands is my preference, but it is better.
I'm sure you'll get other comments.
I took the "hands" to be angel wings in the first version!
Sorry.
Acorn
I agree with all your comments. The hands were rotated into an unnatural position or hidden too much by the plate but I did this to cover any 'amputated' wrists, which would not look very good. Acorn, you had the right impression because I tried to have hands that also resemble angel wings to reflect the nature of this organization's work.
So, here is another effort. Let me know what you think.
First time I've ever done this on the Forum [I have sold a few for some small businesses but I won't be moving to my own island on the proceeds] so here goes.
I have used the website colours and different fonts more businesslike for 'project' and friendlier and softer for 'share'. I tried to keep the logo as simple as possible but still convey that the charity shares. Anyhoo that's what I was thinking - whether it hits the spot is a different matter altogether!
Cheers
David
It's very clever, but it doesn't convey the story of feeding people and the outstretched open hand perhaps doesn't give the right message.
Thanks Pauland and Csehz for your feedback. I stylized the hands a little more.
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