Rough draft animation for advert

[blackspit]

A rough draft animation I created in one week so it's no where near complete, it' a concept advert for a client who asked me to come up with something 'creative', hope I did lol.

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WATCH HERE: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvA6NpHmi4w

[SCALEBACK666]

That's pretty good that is.

[pauland]

Looks like a lot of hard work went into that, but I'm not sure that it sells your client's facilities very well.

The video is 59 seconds long. 39 seconds of that is about the subjects day. Bio Janny isn't seen until 52 seconds in (forgetting the intro text).

I think the balance is wrong. At the very least we should know that the subject is heading for Bio Janny after work so we know that all the fun stuff is happening there. I'd also expect the subject to be thinking about Bio Janny during the day.

Just the way I see it.