@stygg—

Two things you did right: you innovated and I like your brown text much better than my black text. If you actually printed a solid on brown, you'd get a very dirty colour unless you did two passes, the first with an opaque white "undercoat".

The other thing is that you threw the text slightly out of focus: now, the bag itself is in focus, but I "read" the lack of focus around the edges to be the ink bleeding into the bag. Actually, it's a waxed paper bag, so the ink probably won't bleed, but it did catch my eye!

Try messing around some more if you have time!

-g