I like it John. It's much better than the first one. One thing though, you might soften the backgrtound mountains and house some. Everything seems to have equal importance and makes no statement. Obviously the girl is the center of attention but only because of the brightness of her dress. She seems to be pointing out of the picture so you need to put some kind of stop that leads the eye back to her.
For whatever it's worth that's my feelings on what you have done even though you didn't ask. All in all a nice bit of work.