Thanks a lot for your comments Sledger, Iamtheblues and Keith!

I understand what you mean .. on post 13 there is nothing to attract the attention but the car .. only .. that's what I think makes the illustration look kind of cheap and unfinished. Personnally I like it when an illustration is full of details, eyecatchers but offcourse well thought through.. I know its a dangerous game though and it can make the whole picture look overloaded.

Anyway, I see this more as practice then anything else .. thanks again for the comments guys!