CD cover - Critique?

[instinctive.de]

Hey folks,

I'm close to the release of an electronica (progressive trance) track that's somewhat important to me, and currently designing the booklet. I was thinking of a rather 'clean' look this time (for a change).

The track is called 'August' - the artist name and logotype ([instinctive.]) as well as the label logo are not changeable (well, though the colour would be...).

Any suggestions? I'm not sure if I've produced total crap, or if it's actually acceptable

I've attached one version without the water ripples and one with - seems to be an interesting addition to me. I've also attached the xar should anyone want to play around