Help with AD layout for magazine

[doby]

I am going to place an ad in a local community magazine for my husbands business. It's the kind of magazine that people hang onto for the year as it provides alot of local - community specific info.

It is a 2" x 4" spot.

I've come up with the following (all very similar) and would appreciate any guidance from the many talented and experienced people here.

http://www.rvrs.ca/images/RVRS_Mag_AD1.jpg http://www.rvrs.ca/images/RVRS_Mag_AD2.jpg http://www.rvrs.ca/images/RVRS_Mag_AD3.jpg

You can reference the website at www.rvrs.ca

Also for reference, here is the new business card I "think" I'm going with.

http://www.rvrs.ca/images/RVRS_BC12a3.jpg

I'm also attaching (as reference) the 3 sample pages they sent me from last years magazine.

Looking forward to your feedback...