Hello Everyone! Do yall mind if you can help me out with my image(s)

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I'm new here and I kind of feel excited because this is the first photoshop forum that I've ever joined. So Hello

I've been working on this image here:
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1...copyds1.jpgegg
But I found out some flaws in the design. How can I make this image more... breathtaking to say the least. (That is, to the average person)

Here are some stock images if you would like to view them (all tagged for full view):
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http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4...001mh0.jpgeegg
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http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/645...0004np2.jpgegg
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http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9...0002mi1.jpgegg

Any help with effects, photo-touching, brush suggestions, you name it, are all welcomed with open arms. Thanks for the help