Hair Tut?

[bcire68]

I was playing around with a technique that I saw on a previous post http://www.talkgraphics.com/showthread.php?t=27726 and tried to recreate it. I was overall somewhat dissatisfied with my results and amazed by those shown on youtube.

What I was hoping for (from one of you gifted people out there), was a tutorial on how they achieved the effect, at something slower than warp speed. While I attempted only one of the icons that they showed on the video, I was hoping for a general tut on any style of hair.

I am sure that I'm not too far off, with my attempt. I think that I need help mostly with my coloring/shading or highlights/lowlights if you will. Oh, and I intentionally left the hair on my drawing shorter.

Thanks in advance,

Eric