New Business cards ideas

[handrawn]

Huummm

Thing is the eye needs to be drawn into the artwork, otherwise the brain switches off [so the theory goes].

In the example with the shadow text, my eye is drawn to said text.
In the example after it is drawn into the open picture.
I prefer the latter.

This latest version is ok, but the balance isn't quite right - it's the white line that does it.
Extending that across the picture would look wrong I think.
Taking it out altogether might not work either.
Maybe try a second white line between the telephone and the web address to balance.
Think you would need to reduce the width of these two white lines to get it right
I'd be inclined to stick as it was, to be honest.