What I will advice you is to do some little research. Check similar sites; sites that offer the same service. Compare them to one another --- see how sites are designed for the industry in question; look at things that are common among them. What makes the best sites among them, differences, styles, layout, etc. THen come back to design yours.

You've really tried. I got to say that. But men I wont take that as a graphic artistes site. You need to show them what it takes to be an artist yourself.