New Project, Opinions Wanted

[Egg Bramhill]

Hi rhilker

To be brutaly honest this just doesn't work for me. The perspective is all wrong. 'Studio' suggests the vanishing point is way down South (or at least on the 'Studio' base line), but this is not reflected in the text above 'Chasdesign' where the vanishing point is on it's base line (if at all).

The paintbrush doesn't blend into the text either.

I don't intend to be hyper critical, but you have asked for opinions.

Egg

[Egg Bramhill]

In the hope of redeeming myself for being critical I offer a quickly designed alternative, hopefully showing some perspective.
Egg

[Grafixman]

A quick go with Elefont and Blender. Sorry to seem like showboating, but there is a lot of room for improvements here.

[John Rayner]

Personally,

I just let X3d5 play with the hard stuff for this one... http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/wink.gif

[Grafixman]

Here's something even faster:

http://www.cooltext.com/Default.aspx

[Grafixman]

Call me obsessed. http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/tongue.gif
Here's another idea:
http://www.ambigram.matic.com/ambigram.htm
Input your text on the boxes at the top part of the page. You can turn ambigrams upside down and still be able to read it. Cool, huh?
I'm not trying to bomb your thread. I believe what everyone here is saying is that with the wealth of resources available, you could do better. You owe it to yourself to check out the options and possibilities.

[Bob Hahn]

Hey Rhilker,

Here's my 2 cents.

I like the brush idea and how it looks like it has magic flowing from it. You're updated brush also looks better. Instead of the whole brush, just use the tip, the metal part down.

The lettering could be cleaner and easier to read. If you use an italic font and place the brush on the other side, the angle of the lettering and the brush will have a nice flow to them.

The attached photo shows what I mean.

-Bob.

[rhilker]

Thanks Bob.
I really wasn't after a 3d effect or I would have used Ulead.
I like the idea of moving the brush to the right.
Let me work on that.