Hi Toonicorn, pretty sure I'm not the target audience for your t-shirt and also I'm that not clued up on popular culture, so take my feedback with a massive pinch of salt, but there are two things I'm not keen on (both of which might be exactly whole point of the design!):
1) Santa's green hands!
2) the offering of behavioural changing drugs
It's really well drawn but not for me!
Happy Christmas!
Jono (Jon)
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hi TC
nice drawing, bold symmetry that should work well on a TShirt
jono saw hands, I saw gloves, and the colour is just right for the composition between the dark red and the dark green
what did it say to me ? - it said: 'wise choices, like puppies, are not just for christmas' - which is [probably] not what you intended and just the way my mind works....
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The problem is the red/blue pills as offered by Morpheus (well, his avatar), who is black, in the Matrix alludes to (Alice in) Wonderland, not Santa. In the Matrix, red was to reveal reality.
I am therefore at a loss here as to whether red is 'Naughty' or blue is.
@handrawn - might be a typo but you may, with others, have a colour perception problem that means the green gloves destroy the allusion.
I would go with tan gloves, the colour of errant reindeers' hides.
Now who's naughty?
Acorn
Last edited by Acorn; 17 September 2024 at 03:03 PM. Reason: Typo of handrawn & added in the avatar
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not sure what you mean by colour perception problem acorn, certainly I don't see an allusion, what is that meant to be ?
I see the pills ok but not a matrix aficionado
alice was big and small, not naughty or nice, or am I being too simplistic here... there are certainly reality issues in Carroll's books though, and not just alice...
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sorry no, I meant the green of the 'sign' with the lettering on it
because from a compositional point of view, it being a TShirt, it is intended to be viewed comfortably outside of personal space [aka from a distance, be that long or short] and so the pills are actually too small to make a difference to the whole
light tan gloves might well make a difference to that, I'll agree; on the subject of which: don't reindeer have dark tan hides... long time since I saw one in the flesh... [should that actually matter ]
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