Logo critique, please.

[kdale]

I am developing a logo and would like feedback for improvement. Thank you.

Ken

[kdale]

I am developing a logo and would like feedback for improvement. Thank you.

Ken

[Grafixman]

Nice, but I think the dollar sign should be integrated more into the design, or omitted, if possible. Healthcare and money is too harsh a reality to be reminded of for most people. And maybe making "financial systems" smaller and "Healthcare" bigger?

[kdale]

Thank you, Grafixman, for your reply.

This company creates software and provides financial services for healthcare providers. More specifically, it deals with the presentation and management of the financial policy of healthcare providers.

See what you think about the below revision that attempts to address some of your concerns. Thanks,

Ken

[Grafixman]

I'm not sure, but my eye is still drawn to that dollar sign. Maybe it's just me. But you'll notice that banks and financial institutions tend to downplay the money part. I'm sure there are other ways to illustrate "financial". Let's wait for others' opinion. Hey, I'm just one person. In the end, after all is said, it's the client's opinion that counts.

[kdale]

I appreciate your input. Here's what it looks like without the dollar sign.