New Christmas t-shirt design

**Toonicorn** · 25 October 2022, 04:47 PM

Hi all! Back again with another t-shirt design.

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My question is: The title of the design is "Get Lit Responsibly", and I was thinking of adding it to the bottom of the design. But does the design need it? Does the gag work fine without it? Thanks again for the feedback!

**gwpriester** · 25 October 2022, 08:18 PM

Good message. At first I thought they were eggs drinking egg nog. But lights work great.

**Toonicorn** · 25 October 2022, 10:10 PM

Hmmm...it didn't occur to me that someone might not know those are Christmas lights.

I've added text and some holly. Better?

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**handrawn** · 26 October 2022, 01:08 PM

I looked at your design - I thought 'christmas lights' ... so where is the wiring? - then I thought if they are 'roped together' with wiring maybe they should be scaling a tree.....

It's the way my mind 'works' ...

**Toonicorn** · 27 October 2022, 03:01 PM

Hi again!

I've made some changes to the design. I think it works better now. Thoughts?

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**handrawn** · 27 October 2022, 03:32 PM

a lot better

**Boy** · 28 October 2022, 09:29 AM

Originally Posted by Toonicorn

Hi again!

I've made some changes to the design. I think it works better now. Thoughts?

Woah, wait a second! This one carries a totally different message. Where is the don't-DUI bit, the being responsible? This one says, "It's X-mas: Let's just get drunk!" This meme caters to quite a different customer target group. What made you change your original message into this one?