New Christmas t-shirt design

[Toonicorn]

Hi all! Back again with another t-shirt design.



My question is: The title of the design is "Get Lit Responsibly", and I was thinking of adding it to the bottom of the design. But does the design need it? Does the gag work fine without it? Thanks again for the feedback!

[gwpriester]

Good message. At first I thought they were eggs drinking egg nog. But lights work great.

[Toonicorn]

Hmmm...it didn't occur to me that someone might not know those are Christmas lights.

I've added text and some holly. Better?

[handrawn]

I looked at your design - I thought 'christmas lights' ... so where is the wiring? - then I thought if they are 'roped together' with wiring maybe they should be scaling a tree.....

It's the way my mind 'works' ...

[Toonicorn]

Hi again!

I've made some changes to the design. I think it works better now. Thoughts?

[handrawn]

a lot better

[Toonicorn]

a lot better

Thanks! Hopefully I'll sell a few t-shirts of it!

[Boy]

Hi again!

I've made some changes to the design. I think it works better now. Thoughts?

Woah, wait a second! This one carries a totally different message. Where is the don't-DUI bit, the being responsible? This one says, "It's X-mas: Let's just get drunk!" This meme caters to quite a different customer target group. What made you change your original message into this one?

[handrawn]

bad boys are always more interesting [I am told....]

perhaps the responsible message ended up at western union .....

[Boy]

bad boys are always more interesting [I am told....]

Not when they're speeding and swerving down your way raving drunk!