Rudolph's Revenge

[Toonicorn]

Hi again, all!

Well, let's face it, with Halloween over, it's pretty much the Christmas season, amirite?

So I created this Christmas comic using Xara and PSE4.

Feedback would be awesome!

[gwpriester]

Vindictive little guy, no?

[wizard509]

Vindictive little guy, no?

Yes

[Toonicorn]

Thanks guys! Someone at another forum thought "revenge" was too strong a word, so would "Rudolph on Twitter" be a better title? Also, is it funny? (I thought it was, but I'm a bit eccentric...)

[handrawn]

I like that design a lot - you have drawn rudolph in a way that really says what he is thinking

'rudolph's revenge' has a nice ring to it, but is it the correct phrase - revenge does not have to be strong in itself, but it might be excessive for what is being done as it is only revenge if dancer and the rest care about being blocked, so it would depend on how the reader interpreted it as to how appropriate it is

'rudolph on twitter' is good, it encapsulates the senario very well

[handrawn]

... yes it is funny in context, mind you I am more than a bit eccentric, but humour is part of my trade and it comes in all kinds of shapes and sizes.. first rule is always know your audience, will they find it funny