New design - "Cupcake in the Rain"

[Toonicorn]

Hi again, all! I hope it's okay to keep visiting here to get your feedback on my work. I just finished this one - "Cupcake in the Rain", using Xara 10 and PS4. I'd love some feedback on it. Does it work as a design and as an idea? Thanks so much!

[gwpriester]

Works for me. Cute.

[wizard509]

I like Toonicorn.

[handrawn]

the rain that looks like 'rainbow sprinkles' is a nice touch - maybe one or two embedded in the topping without overdoing it

[Egg Bramhill]

I agree with HD. I also think it's too vertical, so I've slanted the rain. Only done a few embedded 100's and 1000's.

[Toonicorn]

Thanks for the feedback and suggestions, guys!

I've tilted some of the sprinkles. I do like it better. What do you think? And thanks!

[Egg Bramhill]

Yep the tilted sprinkles works far better. I still think embedding them as suggested by HD would work as well.

[Toonicorn]

Thanks again, guys!

Here is the design again with some of the sprinkles imbedded, as suggested. Thoughts, please?

[Egg Bramhill]

Love it Toonicorn!

[handrawn]