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  1. #11
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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    Very impressive.

    I wonder if Monarch knows something that we don't.
    I never knew the death business was in such a rush.

    Acorn
    Acorn - My currently active Xara software: XDPX (current, v15, v12 & 11 (64-bit)), unserviced XWD Premium 15 & 12, XPGD10, X3D7; lots of licences back through time (to CC's Artworks). If your Post identifies a Xara software fault, please raise it directly with Magix --> support2.magix.com.

  2. #12
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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    i don't normally comment on logos but these are good
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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    Quote Originally Posted by Acorn View Post
    Very impressive.

    I wonder if Monarch knows something that we don't.
    I never knew the death business was in such a rush.

    Acorn
    LOL Actually Acorn... they're shut down as tight as any business...

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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    Quote Originally Posted by handrawn View Post
    i don't normally comment on logos but these are good
    Well, it's definitely an honor when Acorn & handrawn like the work! LOL

    Normally, they scare the hell out of me!

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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    oh surely not

    just a big pussycat me
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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    Quote Originally Posted by handrawn View Post
    oh surely not
    just a big pussycat me
    ...and I'm not even a sapling!

    Acorn
    Acorn - My currently active Xara software: XDPX (current, v15, v12 & 11 (64-bit)), unserviced XWD Premium 15 & 12, XPGD10, X3D7; lots of licences back through time (to CC's Artworks). If your Post identifies a Xara software fault, please raise it directly with Magix --> support2.magix.com.

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    Default Re: Might As Well Put Up Some Other Mock-Ups Using New Logo

    Here's a couple more mock-ups for this funeral home...

    3-FOLD BROCHURE

    IN-HOUSE WALL-RACK PULL CARD- (FRONT ONLY)

    AND A SHORT PROMO VIDEO USING NEW LOGO - (EXPERIMENT)



    MOCK-UPS - NOT FINALS

  8. #18
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    Default Re: Might As Well Put Up Some Other Mock-Ups Using New Logo

    OK, first of all - the business cards.

    I like the logo, but don't like the cards - too much small text. Older people will be reading them.

    The brochures.

    Not much of a fan of those, but I think that's partly a cultural thing.

    "Loved one's". I am the apostrophe police. The apostrophe should not be there.

    "..." on the end of headings? Yuk.

    "Family Owned and Operated" - the heading has content below that has nothing to do with that fact. I know a lot of people are proud of this but in 2020 do their clients care (I understand it's important to the client)?

    "Planning for the future" - smiling faces. Really?

    The video.

    Nice opener - that's where it should have stopped - with the logo. Presenting slabs of text for people to read kills the idea. If you want text make it longer - much, much longer and animate in sections.

    Just me nitpicking as usual.

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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    great looking Cliff.
    Larry a.k.a wizard509

    Never give up. You will never fail, but you may find a lot of ways that don't work.

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    Default Re: So What Do You Think About This New Logo?

    Cliff, you are clearly highly productive and obviously Xara is your strength as you can turn around a design set in short order.

    I do like your portfolio approach. You might consider Xara Cloud for Teams to handle brochures, business cards and other marketing as you can establish a corporate branding in that very quickly.
    Obviously keeping the Xara Desktop application for web development. I see both would complement your work.

    An extra outlay but Xara offered be a free XDPX, which I traded back for an Update Service extension.
    The benefit to me was no more Magix.
    Have a chat with Rob-Xar on Discord.

    Acorn
    Acorn - My currently active Xara software: XDPX (current, v15, v12 & 11 (64-bit)), unserviced XWD Premium 15 & 12, XPGD10, X3D7; lots of licences back through time (to CC's Artworks). If your Post identifies a Xara software fault, please raise it directly with Magix --> support2.magix.com.

 

 

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