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[gwpriester]

Very nice work.

[Chris M]

Both sites come across as being very well put together and are visually pleasing. I purposely just flicked around instead of reading the content to see what I instinctively clicked rather than be lead around and found the sites easy to navigate.

If I had to nit pick...and I do...here are my hair splitting, personal opinion, subjective blah blah blah:
Reversing Diabetes - the Facebook icon doesn't match the look of the site. There are plenty of FB icons that would match with the round company logo and the 'Top Of Page' link. I even think Xara has one in the Content Catalogue.
RD - the drop down menu under About Us needs to be sternly stared at. It's an obvious Xara Navbar from the early 2K era and doesn't match anything else on the site.
RD - on the Causes Of Diabetes you have a social media bar on the left. It either needs repeating on all pages or removing. It looks odd just being on one page.

Wrought Iron - on the Products page I would like to see the sub menu bar on the main page as it appears on the individual product pages. My reaction was to click the photos to make them bigger, not as a link. I then used the sub menu bar to hop to your other products. Going back to the main Products page had me wondering where the sub menu bar had gone to. Not a huge deal as it only took a split second to work it out, but it's worth mentioning.
WI - On the Design page you have a totally different heading format to the other pages.

Both sites - really, really subjective here. The body text font...slightly too big??? This is like saying 'how hot do you want you curry', very much personal taste.

Sorry I can't help out with the blog side of your question, but I have seen references to Nabble in an iframe on several occasions here on TG.

[Initiostar]

Would be worth another look at your mobile variant for https://www.reversediabetes.com.au/. On my mobile the NavBar submenu exceeds the page width and the top of page button is only half visible.

Maybe it would look better with a solid background on your menu layer? you could group all the social icons together on this layer too.



Xara's standard Navbar submenu is a bit primitive, but from a user navigation perspective maybe retain links to all pages? As you only have a submenu on the About tab, you could use a standard NavBar for your submenu navigation too.



The same principle could apply to a mobile variant, although I prefer a separate inclusive mobile menu page for ease of navigation.



Hopefully some help here.

[pauland]

I think the first site - the diabetes cure - is nicely done ( I hate these kind of sites, but I'll set that aside ).

My suggestion on both these sites is not to have a pure white background. Why not? because the contrast is very high and it makes it slightly uncomfortable to read. Go for an off-white background to knock back the contrast. A lot of websites have 'white' backgrounds that aren't pure white.

Your site is slow to load. I think you have some big images.

The second site.

I kind of despair at the way that what should be a celebration of the skill in making wrought iron work has been reduced to a waterfall of text and small pictures. I absolutely hate the home page it should emphasize in pictures the design and work quality. Make people believe in the quality of the work to want to have these people work for them. Instead what we have in the hero position is "10 year guarantee".

I hate what you've done on the second site. The sea of text is badly laid out and hard to read. Way too much text and content. What should have been a celebration of the skills of those guys has been sacrificed for a load of text to satisfy SEO bots.

I'd like to see a lot less text, a lot less content - there's far too much. Show what they do. Show clients are happy. Explain why they can do a great job for the visitor. Nobody wants to read the amount of text and content that you have. Big pictures, focussed text. Less will be more.

Client: I need some ironwork, these guys look good, I'll contact them. I'm not interested in their life story.

Big thumbs-down on that second site. Sorry.

I would have sent these comments privately but it's not possible. I know a lot of people will think my evaluation is nonsense, but that's fine.

Paul

These sites aren't perfect but showcase the client better. There is a low bar for these sites, it seems.

https://wroughtirondevon.co.uk/bespo...ght-iron-work/

http://www.dcblacksmiths.co.uk/home

https://www.ironcraft.co.uk/products...poke-ironwork/

[Chris M]

Here's where subjectivity comes into play. I agree with Paul about more pictures and less text, I clicked the photos expecting them to enlarge for example.

However, as a customer, the 10 year guarantee would be important, maybe not the main feature, but still high on the list.

And those example sites? The first 2 are very old hat in design and the last one is a mess of animated glitz and template blocks.

Lastly. Please post your views when they've been asked for and not PM them. I, for one, learn how people react to different layouts from the comments.

[pauland]

Here's where subjectivity comes into play. I agree with Paul about more pictures and less text, I clicked the photos expecting them to enlarge for example.

However, as a customer, the 10 year guarantee would be important, maybe not the main feature, but still high on the list.

Yes, the 10 year guarantee is important, but not as the first thing you see.

And those example sites? The first 2 are very old hat in design and the last one is a mess of animated glitz and template blocks.

Yes they aren't the best, but they are an indicator of the direction of travel for the OP. I think your comment about the last site is at odds with my perception. Less animation is good, for sure, but it has good pictures, less text.

The goal is to get a phone call or email from a customer.

Lastly. Please post your views when they've been asked for and not PM them. I, for one, learn how people react to different layouts from the comments.

I can sometimes be less than diplomatic sometimes and rub people up the wrong way, so in this case I would have preferred to have sent my site 2 comment privately. I actually toned down some of what I originally planned to post.

I agree public discussion is better than private posts.

[jackb]

I think the first site - the diabetes cure - is nicely done ( I hate these kind of sites, but I'll set that aside ).

My suggestion on both these sites is not to have a pure white background. Why not? because the contrast is very high and it makes it slightly uncomfortable to read. Go for an off-white background to knock back the contrast. A lot of websites have 'white' backgrounds that aren't pure white.

Your site is slow to load. I think you have some big images.

The second site.

I kind of despair at the way that what should be a celebration of the skill in making wrought iron work has been reduced to a waterfall of text and small pictures. I absolutely hate the home page it should emphasize in pictures the design and work quality. Make people believe in the quality of the work to want to have these people work for them. Instead what we have in the hero position is "10 year guarantee".

I hate what you've done on the second site. The sea of text is badly laid out and hard to read. Way too much text and content. What should have been a celebration of the skills of those guys has been sacrificed for a load of text to satisfy SEO bots.

I'd like to see a lot less text, a lot less content - there's far too much. Show what they do. Show clients are happy. Explain why they can do a great job for the visitor. Nobody wants to read the amount of text and content that you have. Big pictures, focussed text. Less will be more.

Client: I need some ironwork, these guys look good, I'll contact them. I'm not interested in their life story.

Big thumbs-down on that second site. Sorry.

I would have sent these comments privately but it's not possible. I know a lot of people will think my evaluation is nonsense, but that's fine.

Paul

These sites aren't perfect but showcase the client better. There is a low bar for these sites, it seems.

https://wroughtirondevon.co.uk/bespo...ght-iron-work/

http://www.dcblacksmiths.co.uk/home

https://www.ironcraft.co.uk/products...poke-ironwork/

Thanks for the feedback - definitely will take onboard these comments -especially the pure white background.

maybe a couple of points to make on the comments - in regard to the ironwork site - whatever we are doing it sure works well from an SEO point - we turn away about 70% of the leads it generates because it generates so much business and we consistently get comments from new customers saying how the appearance and content of the site were what made them contact us and not our competitors.

loading time- again never mentioned and various SEO tools rank it very well on that score. so not sure why slow loading is being encountered. we still need to do alt text on most images but most are optimised -doing that will further improve SEO

In regard to amount of text and content - this site ranks through the roof, so we wont change a formula that seems to be working so well. At the end of the day it's how much business it generates that matters.

Even though the diabetes site gets favourable comments on appearance, it ranks badly and we plan to add a lot of content in a way that still allows quick reading / skimming but has links to more in depth info for those who want it and to boost rankings.

Appreciate you taking the time to look over and comment Paul.

[Chris M]

Using 'wrought iron gates manly nsw' as search criteria:

DuckDuck - Ranked 6th - Contact page
Google - Ranked 4th - Advisory Services page
Dogpile - Ranked 1st and 2nd - Home page and Contact page
Yahoo - Ranked 8th - Contact page

Page loading isn't an issue for me.

[jackb]

Hi everyone, this is Lisa. I'm the graphic designer who created www.reversediabetes.com.au and have been busy tweaking and finessing the files for a while now. Thanks for all the feed back. I have just done some further changes taking on board some of the comments. I'll explore the off white background option too.
The main change has been the blog page. Interested to hear feedback on how this is working. I also removed the drop down sub menu on the About Us page but have left links to the sub pages on the page itself. All feedback welcome. Cheers, Lisa.

[pauland]

Thanks for the feedback - definitely will take onboard these comments -especially the pure white background.

maybe a couple of points to make on the comments - in regard to the ironwork site - whatever we are doing it sure works well from an SEO point - we turn away about 70% of the leads it generates because it generates so much business and we consistently get comments from new customers saying how the appearance and content of the site were what made them contact us and not our competitors.

OK, that seems like a good result, but not what I would have expected.

loading time- again never mentioned and various SEO tools rank it very well on that score. so not sure why slow loading is being encountered. we still need to do alt text on most images but most are optimised -doing that will further improve SEO

I'd expect your SEO to be good because of the volume of text and repetition. I took the time to look again and the sites have perfectly reasonable load times and looking at site 1, no large images, so I don't know why it took so long when I looked yesterday.

In regard to amount of text and content - this site ranks through the roof, so we wont change a formula that seems to be working so well. At the end of the day it's how much business it generates that matters.

If it's working, then fine. The success of a website doesn't just depend on how it looks - if it generates more work than you can cope with that may say more about supply and demand in your area and the quality of the work that you do.

Even though the diabetes site gets favourable comments on appearance, it ranks badly and we plan to add a lot of content in a way that still allows quick reading / skimming but has links to more in depth info for those who want it and to boost rankings.

Appreciate you taking the time to look over and comment Paul.

Good luck and I'm glad I haven't upset you. It's shocking to see the extent of the fires in Australia right now, so be safe and I hope the situation improves very soon.