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  1. #21
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    Default Re: Henschel Hs P.135 (Work in Progress)

    Wow! Wow! And Wow! This turned out great.

    My dos centavos.

    The clouds farther away could be softer or slightly blurred.

    The line drawings detract from the illustration.

    I am not sure if there is a reason for the font you used, historic? but I think fonts with caps and small caps and old style numerals are more classic and elegant.
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    Default Re: Henschel Hs P.135 (Work in Progress)

    Thanks Gary, for your constructive comments. My only excuse is it was a quickie demo and I spent little time on refining it. I did make the changes you suggested though. Thanks again for your input.
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    Default Re: Henschel Hs P.135 (Work in Progress)

    Those that can do. Those who cannot, critique.
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    Default Re: Henschel Hs P.135 (Work in Progress)

    Gary I look on your advice as coming from the master. I appreciate your help. That's the only way we improve.

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    Default Re: Henschel Hs P.135 (Work in Progress)

    Gary W. Priester
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