Logo

[Turoks]

Made for a local car paints business. All done at Xara.

[wizard509]

In my opinion it would look better if you loose the background.

[steve.ledger]

I really have to struggle to read the world RELOADED. This means it fails to get the message across.
I agree with Larry, but to be honest the entire coloring is awkward and frankly, ugly.

[Scotty]

Hi,
I am inclined to agree with Wizard can't read the reloaded and looks ugly...Ugly!

[handrawn]

I don't think it looks 'ugly' - 'ugly' is relative to context [and for that matter culture] - it's not 'soft and cuddly' or 'suave and elegant', but then it is for a car paint company and maybe 'retro' is what you want too

that said the reloaded text is too cramped to read properly- maybe if you spread the letters out a bit more or used a different font...

[iamtheblues]

I'm inclined to agree with Steve, I like the overall design, particularly the highlights on the V and P and the frame of irregular-width circles.
I'd prefer to see a more legible font, perhaps a slab serif, like Arvo. Also, I'd go for flat colours rather than gradients.
Bob.

[handrawn]

as it's a logo I don't think it needs the background - the rest is enough - but again it depends on where it is going to be used

[theinonen]

Reloaded text is little hard to read, but as humans are curious by the nature it also forces people to focus on the logo longer to see what actually reads in there.