would love some feedback on a banner

[stygg2003]

I think the problem of the RIGINALS not looking joined to the 'O' of the logo is due to the styling and colouring.

Here's my suggestion.
Attachment 90167

The font is Komika Axis.

I like that sledger, nice font, maybe he should change the Original to your font and colours, move to right a little and leave the dragon logo as it is, may be like this.

Stygg

[GCFL]

Yeah, I do like that much better but I cant change the font since its part of her logo. I made the artwork on the banner but the logo is the clients so I will see if she will allow me to change her logo but I doubt it. All great feedback everyone. I really appreciate it. Certainly makes the design process fun.

[GCFL]

bummer! client did not like the cherry blossoms. All the talk about her logo and she dislikes the part I liked. She wants a lotus flower. Back to the drawing board. :/

[steve.ledger]

Best to get a clear brief before you start work, and a down payment with an agreement that the cost includes two revisions only.
Too many 'clients' are under the impression that artwork, graphic and web design is a five minute job

[Fred vanderZee]

And she likes her logo... some people have a very hmmmm how shall I put it... 'interesting' view on design.