Xara jukebox

[Psaumure]

Let me play you a tune from my new Xara jukebox. This is the latest project that I have been working on. Please let me know what you think. I look forward to your comments and feedback.

Paul

[wizard509]

I like it! The only comment I can make at the moment is that the wall behind the jukebox seems too bright and takes away from the focus of this otherwise fine drawing.
So with that said don't get Mr. and his solicitors after me, or yours either for that matter.

[Rik]

Just so that there's no misunderstanding, this is Mr. writing.

I've had a very close look at the jukebox and it seems that Paul has not infringed any of my copyrights, on this occasion.
More's the pity as for a small moment I thought I spotted something that would have been of interest to my solicitors.

As for the Jukebox. Brilliant drawing. I love all the colour choices and how it all looks.
Just brilliant.

Of the songs?
I gave that much thought and 'Yesterday' is my favourite choice from the selection available.

Well done Paul. I really like this drawing.

[Psaumure]

Thank you wizard509 for your comment. As I sat back and looked at the jukebox, things did not look proportional along with the brightness on the wallpaper. I made some additional changes to the jukebox. Let me know what you think. As always, good is not good enough. The nice thing about Xara is that you don't have to redo the whole project to make changes.

As always Rik, thank you for your witty comments.

Thanks,

Paul

[wizard509]

I think it looks better Paul,
But I was just thinking, how would it look with that outer light elipse and it's connecting verticles a glowing color to help seperate it even further. I say that because the background still bothers me. Maybe there is too great a value jump from the light to the dark of the background. The jukebox itself looks great, it's just the background that still bugs me.

[gray]

You've really caught the flavor of the jukebox, Paul.