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[PsYcHoBoY]

Good Evening.. I Wanted to post this and see what people think about my work... It was designed for a local museum and will be in the April edition of True West Magazine -

If It Ain't Harsh... It Ain't True

[PsYcHoBoY]

Good Evening.. I Wanted to post this and see what people think about my work... It was designed for a local museum and will be in the April edition of True West Magazine -

If It Ain't Harsh... It Ain't True

[OklaEd]

The "old guy" needs to be identified as the animatronic character that he is ... otherwise your audience will wonder why the focus of your ad is a mean looking old fart. Otherwise, the dust cloud coming off the herd needs to be a little more pronounced, yet merges well with the prairie grass and your main character. The horizon looks especially good (always hard to make a realistic looking horizon at night) ... but your stars need a little work.

Overall ... a very impressive effort http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

-Ed.

PS ... don't tell anyone we're related ... they might start associating me with some "bitmap" program.

[Mark (theKeeper)]

Looks real good from here.

My only real suggestion is to use a proper starry night sky, and blend the horizon into it more -- so it fades into the black sky and stars more gradually.

[PsYcHoBoY]

Thanks for your replies guys.

If It Ain't Harsh... It Ain't True