Second Site Created With XaraXtreme 5

[Frank Edwards]

Hi again,

Here's the second of three simple sites for my friend that is now live on the web. All comments and advice welcome.

http://www.traceys-school-of-motoring.co.uk/

Many thanks,
Frank

[gwpriester]

Frank - Good job, but the site lacks warmth and personality. People who go to driving school are for the most part terrified. The site should reassure her and him that this is going to be a positive experience. Maybe even fun. You know?

What if you had a photo of Tracey? And/or a photo of one of Tracey's driver's training vehicles?

Maybe a few testimonials from satisfied customers on the home page.

I cannot think of anyone who does not have stories to tell about what it was like to learn to drive.

[gsthunder]

I agree with ^^^. It needs something like a photo or two. Otherwise good job.

[Frank Edwards]

Thank you Gary and gs. These are good points. I'll get her to supply some photos to include. I had asked her to provide some testimonials, but they hadn't come by the time we went live. I'll press her for them.

Many thanks,
Frank