New to Xara...Looking for critique for logo

[steve.ledger]

Actually, I like it just fine as it is - elegant and works for me.

Welcome to TG

[handrawn]

the bottom one is good - well balanced

the middle one does not work - you have two clashing fonts - more than one font in a logo has to be well matched

the top one looks a bit wrong on the two levels, doesn't scan well

that's how I see it

[misstheresa2009]

Thank you all for your feedback. It has been very helpful to me. I actually went ahead and created a new logo.

[misstheresa2009]

Thanks!

[ZEBtoonz]

Okay, I'd love to see what you came up with.

[Big Frank]

Me too, please do show us!

[misstheresa2009]

Okay,

Here is the new logo that I created. I actually got the idea from Berat who I wish to thank personally. You were very kind to offer me your idea. Please note that I am not good with designing logos and I needed as much help as I could get.

Here it is:



Please tell me what you think

[gwpriester]

Welcome to TalkGraphics where the reviews are often mixed.

I like your second design (in the first set you posted) with the sans serif type. Nice mixture of fonts.

[juergen]

Well, I personally like your first set much more than the second. The only change I would do is try to make it a bit easier to read. To see what I mean I did a small modification to your original one. If "new" is mandatory it won't work though :=) Oh, and I just noticed I forgot to close the gap after Dee's ...

Juergen

[color]

I like the first version. But the color appears a little dark~