Hi Eric
very nice cartoon drawing
what's wrong I think is the snout - its more dog/wolf than mouse/rat - this is to do with the 'boxy' shape - should be much rounder
as I have permission I have attached my take
the ears I like - these are good
Hi Eric
very nice cartoon drawing
what's wrong I think is the snout - its more dog/wolf than mouse/rat - this is to do with the 'boxy' shape - should be much rounder
as I have permission I have attached my take
the ears I like - these are good
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I think to make it more mouselike.. might try making things stubbier. The long snout and long neck... just seems more rat like. Look at Tom and Jerry. With Jerry, he is just stubby all around.
Thats just my two Abe Lincolns.
Thanks for the tips. I'm still trying different things so I'll give your suggestions a try. I definately like Steve's nose suggestion. I am also not very happy with the hair but I'll get there eventually.
Eric
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