Burnt Rubber

[pauland]

The tank is a great illustration, but I'm not a fan of having flames added - it takes it from being a technical illustration to a depiction of actual circumstances. In that respect the side on views just don't fit the idea of depicting anything other than technical aspects of the design rather than a particular scenario involving the tank.

Maybe it's just me. I think less (no flames) is more. It's a great technical illustration - don't get me wrong - I just don't like the flames.

Paul

[o5m6]

Thank you for your comments, this time without the flames.

[raynerj1]

Awe... I like them both Oliver. Just plead artistic license...

[pauland]

Nice work Oliver. You can make your tanks however you like - no licence required. I was just giving my opinion.

Paul

[Egg Bramhill]

I'm with Paul on this one. I prefer the "no flames" version. Excellent drawing as always.

[gray]

Love your heavey equipment Oliver. Lots of good details.

[Soquili]

I prefer the drawing without flames.

The black around the flames is spot on for burning rubber. The dense black oily smoke framing the flames looks very real.